- My essay focused on, and based on peer comments and discussion they agree with or are able to see the point, the idea that I agree with how both identity shifts and sponsorship works, but I also added that sponsors create identity shifts and identity shifts are what give literacy narratives, stories, memories, and people meaning.
- My peers said I should introduce some of my quotes a little more extensively, which I can work on. Also, they thought my evidence was pretty good. I used a decent amount of evidence and explanation for each narrative, but I do not think I used to much, and neither did my peers.
- I used quotes and ideas from all three scholars the worked well in my essay and backed up my claims. I found 3 narratives that also worked very well, and as the required quantity is reached and each narrative plays a useful and integral role in my argument, I am fairly good with this portion.
